(11 Dec 2014, 12:50 pm)AdamY wrote I wouldn't worry too much about it. Just focus on why you want to do the course and include any relevant experience. I'm presuming it's something to do with childcare - so try and encapsulate your passion for the subject too. Write from the heart and you won't go far wrong.
I would, however, ask someone to proof-read your statement before submitting it.
Thanks, so far iv'e wrote about my future goals, leading in to why i want to do this course, then what iv'e done on my current course, like my research project etc, iv'e also wrote about my work experience.
My teacher is gonna proof read it but she only told us on Tuesday that if were putting our application form in through the college it has to be done by Friday so not much time at all...