(11 Dec 2014, 5:11 pm)Tom wrote Very impressive. I can't even write two lines of a poem, never mind that! Thankfully we didn't have to write a poem in English, just comparing two poems.
I'm not sure what it is about though - the ''Two ears floppy'' and ''Tail wags in joy...'' suggests it is about your dog though?
Cheers, Tom!
Well, there's two characters in it. It's called 'On The Streets', one is an abandoned old female dog.
Figured both are two subjects that are raised a lot in these situations, and they'd be good to use for the poem.
With a sonnet, the rhyming thingy has to be like ABABCDCD, so for example, the first line rhymes with the third and the second rhymes with the fourth, etc. - so I felt like having two characters would fit in nicely making each line of contrast to the next.